Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Struggles


When you think about a story,and compare it to life, there are so many similarities. One main part of everyday life is getting through tough situations. It is what shapes your day and, with even larger conflicts, your life. In a story, what does all of the detail and events get based around. The answer is also the conflicts. Every tale needs at least one conflict, but some have several. In The Old Man and the Sea, the old man faced many difficulties, and not just when he was actually catching the fish, but in other parts of his life, too. Some of the main conflicts include his old age, his growing loneliness, the sharks attacking his fish, and the hand that he hurt when fighting to catch the massive fish.

Santiago was the main character of this novella, and he was a very old man. Not only that, but he is also very worn out from fishing all of his life. Although he had the youth of the little boy with him for a while, when Manolin had to go back to work with his father, Santiago was left to do things on his own. He was very capable of fishing, but not as proficient to take on large journeys and adventures out to sea. This was not only because he was getting older, but also he was lonely without Manolin. Although they were not very talkative on the boat, he was still a companion to have, and Santiago knew that the little boy was a great help to him. There were many small jobs that the boy did that were still very important to the old man. The old man had several points during his trip when he missed the boy very much, and found himself talking to himself more than usual. “No one should be alone in their old age, he thought. But it is unavoidable” (48). Here, Hemingway shows that Santiago knows of his disadvantages as being a very old fishermen, but was not fretful about this, but instead wise, and aware of his situation being without the boy.

If the boy had been with him, then he may not have faced another conflict. As he was struggling with the gigantic fish, he cut his left hand on the taut line. This caused it to be useless and cramp up, where he could not loosen it at all. This also related to the boy being absent on this fishing trip because Santiago explains that Manolin would have wet the lines for him to keep it from happening. “If the boy were here he could rub [his hand] and loosen it down from the forearm, he thought” (62). Santiago probably felt very careless when he cut his hand on the line, but he also felt that if Manolin was there, then he would not have been as sloppy with how he injured himself.

Santiago was able to catch the grand fish and he was very proud of it;however, he faced a conflict in bringing it back to the island. He had made decision to go so far out that once he caught the fish, he would have travel back hoping not to be attcked by too many sharks. It was very difficult for him to get them away. “...the old man could hear the noise of skin and flesh ripping on the big fish when he rammed the harpoon down onto the shark’s head” (102). He had to do this several times, and by the last sharks, he could no longer hold them off. His whole fish was gone, and he arrived back to the island with nothing but a carcass. This made him very elegiac, especially after the long journey he had been through.

Conflict builds a story up to a climax, and the more intense the conflict is, the more interesting the story will be. This is the same with how life is everyday. In the Old Man and the Sea, Ernest Hemingway included several smaller conflicts around the main conflict of trying to catch a gigantic fish after catching nothing for eighty-five straight days. Stories are the same as a person's life; they include conflicts that need to be resolved and others that are not resolved, and they all have an affect on the outcome.

6 comments:

  1. I. I think Nicki's essay has two thesis sentences. They are "In The Old Man and the Sea, the old man faced many difficulties, and not just when he was actually catching the fish, but in other parts of his life, too. Some of the main conflicts include his old age, his growing loneliness, the sharks attacking his fish, and the hand that he hurt when fighting to catch the massive fish." They were clear and very easy to understand.

    II. I think that Nicole best quotation used in the essay was her first quote. It specifically talks about what the boy could do if he was there to help. It makes the overall paragraph easier to understand.

    III. One thing that Nicole does very well is explain her quotes. It helps the reader to picture the situation.

    IV. One thing that Nicole may want to consider doing is adding more information to her introduction paragraph before her thesis. Maybe add more about a conflicts.

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  2. 1. This essay's thesis is: "Some of the main conflicts include his old age, his growing loneliness, the sharks attacking his fish, and the hand that he hurt when fighting to catch the massive fish." It is clear and has specific points that the essay follows through with.
    2. I think the last quote was the best. It clearly told what the old man did and she used it well.
    3. I think Nicki's quotes and word choice were very well done. "As he was struggling with the gigantic fish, he cut his left hand on the taut line. This caused it to be useless and cramp up, where he could not loosen it at all. This also related to the boy being absent on this fishing trip because Santiago explains that Manolin would have wet the lines for him to keep it from happening."
    4. I agree with Amanda. There is no comparing conflicts in real life.

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  3. I. The thesis of the essay was that Santiago faced many conflicts in the book. It is clear, concise, and focused because she stated it in 1/2 sentences at the end of her introductory paragraph. I was engaged.

    II. I thought the conflict about getting the marlin back to shore was the best. I thought it was explained well. It's supports the thesis because it's one of the main conflicts of the book.

    III. I thought the introductory paragraph was good. I liked how she began with a question. I also liked how she didn't say her thesis till the end of the paragraph, which is the proper format.

    IV. I would just suggest shorter quotes and reorganization. I thought that the last quote was kinda long, maybe just a piece of it would get your point across just as well. Also, it's hard to distinguish between paragraphs because of the blog format. I couldn't tell if you had a conclusion. Other than that, I thought it was good!

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  4. I. The thesis of this essay is - "In The Old Man and the Sea, the old man faced many difficulties, and not just when he was actually catching the fish, but in other parts of his life, too. Some of the main conflicts include his old age, his growing loneliness, the sharks attacking his fish, and the hand that he hurt when fighting to catch the massive fish." I think that both of these sentences are needed to make this a complete and clear thesis, and when they are put together, it is really good.

    II. I think that Nicole's first quote was the best, because she integrated it into her essay really well. She also analyzed it in a way that made it support her thesis really well. I think that all of her quotations were good though.

    III. I liked the way that Nicole used her quotes. I could tell that she didnt just plop them onto her paper. She picked good quotes that would really support her thesis, and she analyzed them really well.

    IV. I think that Nicole should add more to her intro. Mr BG told us to relate our thesis and subject to specific things in real life. I think this is something that would really help her essay.

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  5. I. Nicole's thesis is In The Old Man and the Sea, the old man faced many difficulties, and not just when he was actually catching the fish, but in other parts of his life, too. Some of the main conflicts include his old age, his growing loneliness, the sharks attacking his fish, and the hand that he hurt when fighting to catch the massive fish."
    II. In this essay she uses all of her quotes very well, however I would have to say that her first one was used and integrated very well.
    III. Nicole's strongest aspect of her essay is her quotes. I think she chose really good ones, and she also integrates them. Another thing she does well is analyzes.
    IV. One thing Nicole could work on his her introduction, she could add more about the general subject instead of relating everything to the novella.

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